Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
Introduction, she started really good
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
I think she gave to much on the plot. If someone have not seen the movie, he or she could not have read it
The draft was incomplete
(?) Questions?
Did you compare it to another movie that is similar or made by the same director? I don’t think I’ve caught that.
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
-Great movie choice
-Good background information
-Good plot
-Good scene by scene critical review
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
The introduction was a great way to begin the essay.
Extremely detailed
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
The review sounds like an exact play by play of the movie so it doesn’t seem summarized.
Notes for Peer’s Oral Response
Essay # __3__
Writer _____Kanwal_________ Peer Respondent ____Phanessa_________
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
Introduction, she started really good
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
I think she gave to much on the plot. If someone have not seen the movie, he or she could not have read it
The draft was incomplete
(?) Questions?
Did you compare it to another movie that is similar or made by the same director? I don’t think I’ve caught that.
Notes for Peer’s Oral Response
Essay # ___3__
Writer __________Kanwal________________ Peer Respondent _____Joseph________________
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
-Great movie choice
-Good background information
-Good plot
-Good scene by scene critical review
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
-repetitive
-unfinished
(?) Questions?
-When will the draft be finished?
Notes for Peer’s Oral Response
Essay # _____
Writer __Kanwal____________________________ Peer Respondent __Tebogo Outlule____________________________
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
(+) What works? (praise)
The introduction was a great way to begin the essay.
Extremely detailed
(-) What Doesn’t (polish)
The review sounds like an exact play by play of the movie so it doesn’t seem summarized.
(?) Questions?
Why did you pick this movie?